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Monday, April 10, 2017

PAD Challenge - Day 10

From Robert Lee Brewer:

Well, we just made it in from Austin. 18 hours, but we’re back home, and the kids are all sleeping in their beds.

Yay! For today’s prompt, write a travel poem. Your poem can be about the process of traveling, planning to travel, vicariously traveling through television programs, or however else you’d like to take this prompt.


Note from Victoria: After today we are 1/3 of the way there!!! Wahoo!!!

20 comments :

  1. I may not have time for a new poem today so I thought I'd get this one in now. It's one of my kid poems.

    WHERE I WANT TO GO
    a quatrain (heroic)

    I want to go to Africa and see
    impalas, lions, tigers, monkeys, snakes,
    giraffes, gazelles, some crocs and wildebeests.
    The palm trees, sneezewood, mangroves, and the lakes.

    Then on to see Australia's platypus,
    the kookaburra, dingo, kangaroo,
    koala eating leaves of eucalyptus
    trees, Tasmania, the Outback too.

    From there, I'll travel on to outer space,
    but stop at Mars to see Olympus Mons,
    Centauri Montes, Hellas Impact Basin
    and Valles Marineris right at dawn.

    To Rigel next, Orion's brightest star!
    I'll travel up Orion's arm until
    I get to Betelgeuse, and go as far
    as we can go, and travel further still.

    I'll pile up adventures and decide
    where I will start, and how I will proceed;
    then take my chosen book and go outside
    to snuggle on the porch swing where I'll read.

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    1. what a wonderful journey!!! love it!

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    2. Nice joy, wow you have such a broad knowledge and display it so very nicely. Kudos.

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    3. I don't know what happened to my comment from yesterday. It went into the ozone. I said that this was a very amusing and fun poem. I said that I enjoyed it very much. I'm sorry that it seemed as though I didn't comment because I did. It's a great poem.

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  2. In case I don't have time to write a new one today here is one of my all time favorite travel poems of mine

    Ein Bahn Strasse Edit

    you call shortly after your son is born
    except for your young husband
    you are alone in a foreign country.
    Will I come for a visit?

    I ask my boss for a week off
    February is my birthday month,
    he's from Germany, he gives me two weeks
    tells me one weeks is not enough.

    On the ride from Frankfurt to Weisbaden
    we have time to catch up,
    talk of the family, giggle,
    and just enjoy being together again.

    Reminiscent of our walks around our hometown
    we walk the streets of Wesibaden,
    with the baby in a backpack we experience the city
    your son sleeps, his head nestled on your back.

    It's so different from home, yet so familiar
    houses built against each other
    no room for backyards or swing sets
    the buildings are old yet beautiful.

    Die baby's kalte, one woman says
    I touch his cheek warm from sleep
    he's bundled in the backpack
    the warm hat you knit him on his head.

    We sample dark German chocolates
    take turns carrying your son,
    we walk until we're exhausted,
    "I think we're lost," you say.

    "No, we can't be," I tell you
    "we've been on the same street."
    "What's the name of it," you ask.
    "Ein Bahn Strasses," I reply.

    You laugh. "We're lost," you say,
    "that means one way street."
    We both laugh, ask directions,
    find our way back to your apartment.

    The time passes too quickly
    I am at the airport leaving
    announcements come in a language
    I still don' t understand.

    You stand their alone
    in a foreign country
    surrounded by strangers,
    your son sleeps nestled on your back.

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    1. Wow, does that bring back memories. That was a LONGGGGG time ago. 42 years actually. I hate it when I do the math in my head without thinking.

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    2. What a lovely journey that was. I so enjoyed it. Thanks or this sharing, the descriptions were so cozy and so touchng. Kudos!

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    3. The way you wrote this gave me a nostalgic feeling as if I was right there with you. I loved the way you ended it. It was so sad...

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  3. To Travel Or Not To Travel

    When I was young I so wished to go traveling,
    wending my way on some river unraveling,
    finding the scenic and glamorous byways,
    seeing new vistas on broad foreign highways.
    But time and my hopes did not coincide
    and I ended up living my life as a bride
    to husbands who wished to stay closer to home
    and did not desire to ramble or roam.
    So while I was able to travel a bit
    My lust and my dreams still took a big hit.
    However the time when I wish for new places
    Is rapidly melting into my home bases
    And rather than travel to here and to there
    I think I'll just do it right here in my chair,
    Reading and watching those folk on TV
    Who do all the traveling I don't for me.

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    1. lovely story, lovely poem. You do well with rhyme and rhythm. I'm glad you got to do a little traveling in this life. I traveled the USA but I still dream of Europe and the Castles...

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  4. I did manage to travel to Italy to see my daughter for a few years, and spent a little time in Denmark where I lectured with my husband. however, that was not the travel I wished for or dreamed of, maybe in my next life, eh?

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    1. I have always had a bad case of wanderlust. I've traveled a lot but not so much lately. I think I'm just more settled as I get older. I enjoyed the poem, and yes, life tends to interfere with your plans. Sigh...

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    2. my mother always told me I had itchy feet that were unable to stay in one place for long. sometimes i miss the days i was able to get up and go whenever and wherever I wanted but now I enjoy my tea and reading a book Victoria gave me a couple years ago when I got so sick... When Wanderers Cease to Roan - A Travelers Journey of Staying Put by Vivian Swift. highly reccomend it.

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    3. uh recommend... got my fingers tangle up!

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    4. Thank you my friends, I appreciate your comments, and especially yours, Linda,I think all of us are good at rhyme and rhythm, don't you?

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  5. When I was 12 and 13
    I used to haunt
    travel agencies
    they didn't seem to mind
    as I picked up literature.

    I planned trips to Europe
    planned all the things
    I wanted to see
    I planned visits to Spain
    that would last a month
    visiting relatives
    in Orensa

    I would talk one of them into
    going to Madrid with me
    to see the Royal Palace
    We would go on to Seville
    and tour the Royal Alcazar
    Go on to Barcelona
    and see the Salvador Dali Museum
    Go on to visit the
    museum of Pablo Picasso
    which is housed in five
    medieval palaces

    When my month in Spain
    came to an end
    I would go to Italy, by boat
    to see famous things like
    the leaning tower of pisa
    then back to France
    to see the Eiffel tower
    and the Louvre

    On to England
    to see castles
    and walk through one
    and more castles
    in Scotland and Ireland

    Now, at 12 and 13, I didn't
    realize I needed money to travel.
    At the end of my European tour
    I would go back to the travel agency
    and pretend I was
    going to India or China

    I wonder now
    what the people at the
    travel agency really thought
    of me...

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    1. I would bet they were amused and hoped you actually made it to Spain or England or Scotland. I think they would have simply kicked you out otherwise.

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    2. I remember those days! you would take me with you sometimes and we would have such fun. It was those experiences that familiarized me with travel agencies and how I knew where to go to plan my first overseas trip to Germany.

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    3. taking you with me always gave me more courage to do what I wanted to do. lmbo!!!

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    4. The yearning comes through so nicely!

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