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Tuesday, April 17, 2018

2018 PAD Challenge - Day 17, Love/Anti-love

From Robert Lee Brewer:

For experienced April PAD Challengers, today’s prompt will seem familiar. In fact, I kind of tipped my hand yesterday with my example poem of what today’s Two-for-Tuesday prompt would be.

For today’s Two-for-Tuesday prompt:

  1. Write a love poem. 
  2. Write an anti-love poem.

17 comments :

  1. I don't believe in forever after
    fairy tales or prince charming
    lovers walking hand in hand
    into a perfect sunset

    I don't believe in perfection
    dream mates or life without problems
    genies in a bottle
    three wishes to come true

    I do believe in reality
    life sucks at times
    no one is perfect
    we will get angry and fight

    I believe strongly in hope
    I believe in passion
    and being astonished by life
    but mostly I believe in love.

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    1. Love that last verse, especially the third line. The whole poem is good, too.

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    2. that's my problem. i do believe in fairy tales and forever. but usually get slain by dragons - love and peace - paul.

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  2. This is powerful. And a pretty damned good love poem too.

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  3. Secrets slither down
    hallways concealed by doorways
    eclipsed by shadows.

    Her red lips, red hair
    red dress, shimmer in dim light
    as the door opens.

    "Stop," she cautions, then
    views the intruder, smiles
    with invitation.

    Case of mistaken
    identity, so like him,
    she discerns too late

    it was not bright, door
    unlocked, unprotected. One
    can intrude unheard.

    "Pizza?" he inquired.
    Pepperoni, sausage. Smells
    waft across the room.

    Memories flood her
    senses, family dinners,
    Friday gatherings.

    "So like your father,"
    she says, "thought you were a ghost
    come back to haunt me."

    "I battle that ghost
    each day." her visitor puts
    forth. "He's never gone."

    A good deal of time
    has passed since their last meeting
    yet they do not touch.

    "You should, could, have warned,
    prepared my marrow for this
    abrupt reunion.

    Why now?" she laments,
    purses her red lips, turns her
    red dress to the wall.

    She slumps, a spider
    luring prey, feels arms surround,
    capture completed.

    "Let's eat some pizza
    before it gets cold, but you
    must hear my report."

    Words tight, a coiled spring
    ready to release, trigger
    savage explosions.

    Deflects, takes a bite
    of pizza. "My favorite.
    But you always were."

    "You loved only him,
    forsaking us for one kiss,
    promises unkept."

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    1. sometimes one kiss makes all the difference -love and peace - paul.

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    2. me too...what fun it is to see the story develope.

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  4. Tasha, I meant "deflects." I did start out trying to make each stanza independent and didn't even realize that one wouldn't work independent of the stanza before it. The person is deflecting the "savage explosions" of words.

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  5. Love you/ Don't Love you

    A wise man told me, and I quote:
    "You have to love everyone, however
    you don't have to like them all."
    And I agree. Moreover,
    when the obligation is fulfilled
    the rest is up to me, and I am free
    to do as I like, whenever I decide
    whatever way I want it to be.

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    1. whenever Linda's kids told me they hated me I would tell them I don't like you very much right now either...I will always love you but not always like you. that made them stop and think. lol

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    2. obviousaly this man was not from north east england tash ha ha. agree with the sentiment though - love and peace - paul.

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  6. love poem is too easy for me. i'm sure some ladies on the site think they know who i'm gonna write it about. wellll she's had more poems than shakespeare and she is still a lying, thieving, whoring devil's daughter...bitter at all? like fricken lemon juice ha ha. here is a poem about ladies that deserve a poem.

    IN THE LIBRARY 5

    i love the library ladies
    every one of them
    if i'd known about library ladies in my teens
    i never would have gone to pubs and clubs in my tight jeans
    when the lovely charlotte told me " i love poets " during one of my performances, i thought there were maybe's
    asked her to cream tea and the ballet
    but she said no and about having a boyfriend surgeon, in a nice way
    i didn't know what to say
    i kissed her hand, but i would have kissed her dresses hem
    and her hurty foot, where her shoe rubs

    along with happy holly, with the thousand yard stare
    curious catherine and shy claire
    who blushes and hides behind her hair
    i'd pitch a tent in the library and live there
    but stern scottish linda, the library manager would throw me out
    with a spank and a clout

    you're my girl and you don't even know it
    i'm living out the life of a poet.



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    1. thanks bonita. some library ladies work unpaid, or don't need the money. they just love books and want to keep library's open. tried to keep sunderland library open, through various methods, but the evil council closed it anyway. one of the reasons i make the 32 mile round trip to newcastle's 6 story all glass and chrome and lovely ladies. what more could i want? - love and libraries - paul.

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    2. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now you wrote a very fine poem here, and that's a fact. Thanks for this lovely description of your library loves.

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  7. oh Paul!! this is so sweet and lovely! beautiful poem about some truly beautiful women

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    1. thanks bonita. if these women had wings etc. such a change from the devil's daughter - love and libraries - paul

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