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Tuesday, April 26, 2016

Day 26

For today’s Two-for-Tuesday prompt:
  • Write a love poem. Or…
  • Write an anti-love poem.
Robert Lee Brewer's Original Post

9 comments :

  1. I totally fell asleep last night after last minute trying to make the dojang look nice and teaching class (although Ian did most of it.) And today I am cheating a bit. This poem has been sitting in my "working" folder for a long time. So I "worked" it rather than writing something new. It was perfect for today though since, despite the title, it's sort of both a love poem and an anti-love poem.

    A LOVE POEM
    a 5/4 poem

    I tell Brittany
    Tenaira, Angelanne
    that I love them.
    That’s a lie,
    they tell me. I know

    I should own up to it,
    the fact that I
    tell the truth,
    but I do not, tell them
    that I exaggerate

    because they will
    not believe
    me, cannot believe
    a teacher could love them,
    since they do not

    love themselves
    or me. I tell them
    that I care. Angelanne
    smiles and believes
    that I do.

    She will still be late
    tomorrow, or absent.
    She will still fail
    math this year
    even with my love.

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  2. gave me goosebumps for some reason. it really moved me and touched my heart.

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  3. Bonnie JohnsonApril 26, 2016 at 4:16 PM
    The Beatles told us all we need is love
    While Tina Turner asked 'what's love got to do with it"
    we listen to the call of the mourning dove'

    yet I wonder if love is something we have run out of
    have we given up as our hearts quit
    the Beatles told us all we need is love.

    It feels more like a mismatched glove
    as we try and try to make it fit
    we listen to the call of the mourning dove


    there is nothing left for us to speak of
    and I wonder where is it writ
    The Beatles told us all we need is love

    there is nothing less real I can conceive of
    so in the silence of the night we sit
    we listen to the call of the mourning dove

    the stars shine and twinkle above
    I wonder do we give a whit
    The Beatles told us all we need is love
    we listen to the call of the mourning dove

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    1. Wow. Awesome villanelle. I know the feeling too.

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  4. Finally here with poem. thanks for the prodding, Victoria.

    Love Poem

    Love is a poem in and of itself
    There is no other way I know to say
    how love affects the mind and too the heart,
    and brings it pain and joy combined each day.

    Like poetry love beats its rhythm out
    enhancing all I do and all I see,
    I do not know how else to view my life
    or to describe the way it nurtures me.

    I feel my poetry within me sing
    I live the verse, I am, I move along
    Love is my all, and poetry my life
    I live my love within its metered song.
    Tasha Halpert

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    1. Many thanks for kind words. Hope you are feeling better! Paul was so worried about you! Lvoe and a hug, Tasha

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  5. The Great Law of Emotivity

    Everyone knows
    love and anti-love
    cannot coexist
    in the same space
    as they readily ironically
    annihilate each other.

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  6. Love

    I cannot write of Love
    not because I failed at Love
    but because I can’t define Love
    cannot explain that Love
    of country differs from Love
    of long, hot showers and Love
    of kittens is not like Love
    of my own children. Love –
    such a short word
    to mean so much


    Priscilla Anne Tennant Herrington

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