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Friday, April 20, 2018

2018 PAD Challenge - Day 20, Take a line

From Robert Lee Brewer:

For today’s prompt, take a line from an earlier poem (preferably from this month) to begin your poem for today. For instance, I took the final few lines of my poem from day 12 to start my example poem below. So scan through your earlier stuff to figure out where to start today.

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  1. Between friends and relatives
    the line can blur blur in a haze
    of who is who in our lives.
    Relatives are not always friends
    and we have friend we call
    sister and brother our hearts
    are so close - bound by more
    than blood or relation.
    It is said we cannot choose
    our relatives but I believe we can
    and often it is hard to discern
    which or who are closer to us
    share our feelings and have our backs
    but I hope when times are tough
    we are not forced to choose our loyalties
    between friends and relatives.

    (I took my line from the first poem under the prompt Secrets)

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    1. Very interesting, and I agree I have closer friends as sissters than I was ever with my actual one, alas.

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    2. eeerrr the less said about my relatives the better. music was considered as " bloody noise " and books were considered " a waste of time " when i was growing up. it was only when i met my musician friends that i blossomed - nice one bonita. hit a nerve here - love - paul.

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  2. In Days Long Ago

    In long ago days
    things were different they say,
    And I wonder if that's really true?
    Because I have read
    what people have said
    When theirs were the days of then.
    And it seems they complain
    of much of the pain
    that afflicts us in now as well,
    so I cannot be sure
    that the long ago days
    were really so pristinely pure!
    I expect that they weren't
    and that nothing has changed
    except maybe fashions and such
    so I guess I am blessed
    with my presence in now
    and I'm grateful I'm given so much.

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    1. well the music was a lot better in the old days, i know that much tash. the movies too have a nice weekend - love - paul.

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    2. yes we have been given much and some still don't appreciate it... what previously posted poem did you use to take your first line?

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    3. Bonnie, I checked back and it was my poem Senryu Lament, I think it was day 14, lament poems

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  3. Please, friends, read the poem I added today to yesterday as well,Thanks!

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  4. weltschmerz is a german word meaning the real world can never satisfy the demands of the mind.
    first line is from my " temptation or obliteration " poem.

    WELTSCHMERZ

    you may lose a thousand battles in life
    and be tempted by the knife

    but come, let us talk no more of the past
    but about things that last

    the mind begs for so much
    things the body can never touch
    but........but........but.......maybe baby
    we could be gentle man and gentle lady

    the mind always demands more
    than a reasonably clean floor
    and a lying junkie whore
    my mind demands a lady i can fight in shining armour for.

    - love - paul.

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    1. love the poem but don't remember that first line from any of your poems. please we shouldn't have to go back and read all your previous poems... Tasha and Paul please not the previously posted poem from which you took your first line.

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    2. it's from " temptation or obliteration " i only wrote it a few days ago . i don't read my previous poems either ha ha - have a nice weekend bonita - love - paul.

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    4. you mislead us in your comment that you only wrote it a few days ago and insisted to me in text messages you didn't need to do one already posted. but this is already posted under temptation... why do you play games like that?

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    5. This is an excellent poem!!! I have always understood that word to mean world sorrow, or universal regret. My family spoke German when they didn't want me to know what they were talking about, so I learned a bit of it myself.

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