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Sunday, October 11, 2020

Three! Three! Three prompts in one!

 From Linda.

Choose one or do all three.

  • write a love love poem without using the word love
  • write a poem about something bizarre that happened to you personally
  • write a poem about anger and what you do with your anger


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  1. my heart is warmed
    by your embrace
    since the beginning
    of “us”
    my life has become whole
    my thoughts are more clear
    because you have given me
    peace and joy
    you are my smile
    you radiate my sunshine
    you are special beyond
    magnificent and you
    are mine...

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    1. This is my first poem. I’m going to do all 3!

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    2. Sweet and powerful at the same time. I don't think you need the lines "since the beginning / of us."

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  2. something bizarre

    they laughed when we told them
    we’d seen that UFO!!!
    but it was fascinating to see
    and others saw it, too
    it ended up in the newspaper
    but we saw it right there
    above the water
    as it hovered over Lake Erie
    and scared my boyfriend
    running home to mama!
    and she laughed
    and called us nuts
    it was summer
    in 1966
    and I saw what I saw
    and now I know for sure
    there is intelligent life
    elsewhere in this
    universe...

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    1. Oh my what an experience!!! Truly bizarre, and quite fascinating.

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    2. I remember you telling me about that. Truly bizarre. And I think the poem ends at "and I saw what I saw."

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  3. I was angry once
    at a so called friend
    who betrayed my trust
    It became tedious to smile
    and be friendly to her face
    so, what i did
    was challenge her
    by calling out her crimes
    I told her in the eye
    I would never trust her again
    I was ready for some punches
    I’d called a thief a thief
    but she glared her eyes
    and stormed away
    and I’ve never seen
    her since...

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    1. I find this kind of sad. For you of course, but for her too, that she would likely never have real friends if that was how she was.

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  4. Interesting outcome...she must have been sooo embarrassed!

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  5. I really meant to write something new for this and I still might, but when thinking of bizarre things, I thought of my first year teaching, and this set of poems from "Yo Miss! I Need a Pencil!", my book about that year, came to mind. I included the small prose segment because of the "what did you do with the anger" part. Together, they do fit all three prompts.

    MISJUDGEMENT

    Hazika in a foul mood. It’s Friday.
    I am tired, view her as bad, not changed from
    usual good, don’t see something’s gone wrong.

    She pushes. I push back. Verbal showdown.
    "No," I say. You can’t go to the bathroom
    until you do some work. She sits, enraged,

    stews, then gets up to storm out of class.
    I close the door, angry, hold it tightly.
    She pushes, shoves past. I call the office,

    tell them she’s gone, assume it is over.
    Summoned to the principal’s office, I’m
    told she screamed like a wildcat, fought like one,

    went ballistic and bit the principal.
    Her mother took her to the hospital.
    I wait, but she is absent four days now.

    ---

    Hazika is back in my class today. She sits quietly, looks embarrassed. I smile at her. She smiles shyly.
    Dezi says to her, “Hey, did you go crazy?”
    I say, “Don’t we all sometimes? Ready to work with the Snap Cubes?” I smile at them both, against Jed’s command not to smile before Christmas.
    Everything is cool. We play. We learn. We move on.

    ---

    BLANCA AND HAZIKA
    couplets

    Blanca takes my hand and holds it
    tightly, serious, eyebrows knit

    says, "I heard that girl who pushed you
    come back to school." I ask her who

    she means. My hand still held she turns
    to Carly, speaks Spanish, concern

    apparent in her voice, turns back.
    "Hazika", she says and nods. No slack

    in grip, I wonder what she means
    by this, not wanting any scenes.

    I tell her Hazika’s good, had
    a day where things got very bad.

    "She give you any problems, I’ll take
    care of her." Dumbfounded, I shake

    my head, a loss for words to say,
    Blanca lets go my hand, "OK?"

    ---

    BLANCA’S GONE
    a villanelle

    Blanca didn’t go home last night
    but came to school this morning still
    in need of friends to hold her tight.

    Her foster mother waited right
    there, social worker too, both shrill.
    Blanca didn’t go home last night.

    She saw them, turned and ran, took flight
    to find someone who cared, until
    in need of friends to hold her tight,

    there was nowhere to go. She’d fight.
    They called the cops against her will.
    Blanca didn’t go home last night.

    She won’t be back this time. Her light
    gone from my classroom leaves a chill
    in need of friends. To hold her tight,

    I wish I could rock her, say bright
    futures await her to fulfill.
    Blanca didn’t go home last night,
    in need of friends to hold her tight.

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    1. So interesting.Have you written this up as a book? It's a kind of poetic Blackboard Jungle.Kudos!

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  6. Wow, when I read these the first time my emotions went wild. I got tears in my eyes and I felt chills in my body . Well, now I read them again and WOW, I had all the same feelings!!! Power poetry!!!

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  7. My first attempt, not sure if i will be my only.

    40 years and Counting

    How can it be that so much time has passed?
    When all those years seem but a blink of eye.
    Best friends as we have been both you and I
    We've traveled hand in hand from first to last.

    You have encouraged me, as I have you
    We've grown together happily and seen
    The triumphs gained and losses that have been
    The roads we've taken as we've passed on through.

    I have embraced you with desirous arms
    You've given me much pleasure all our days,
    Not just with hands but in so many ways,
    As you've displayed your dear, entrancing charms.

    How many years will it turn out to be?
    Just call it what it is, eternity.

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    1. this is truly beautiful, Tasha. I loved the way you used travel to depict your years together ...

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    2. To me life is a journey, and it's so nice to have an always traveling companion.

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    3. Lovely envelope sonnet. The sentiment really is beautiful. It choked me up.

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  8. Anger Senryu

    Anger makes me cry
    which makes me even crosser
    also embarrassed.

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    1. I really can relate with this...

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    2. And it is sooooo annoying!!! Thanks for that prompt. It really made me think.

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    3. Me too. I remember being that way even as a kid.

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  9. Well I did get inspired to rise to the challenge after all.

    Is This Bizarre?

    I couldn't think of anything bizarre
    except perhaps the serendipity
    that seems to guide the progress of my days.
    No matter how I plan what I will do
    where go, or not, my path evolves itself.
    At times I know not where that way will lead
    yet I must follow it with faith and love.
    Some people think to live that was is odd,
    Yet being used to it, it suits me fine.

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    1. it fits the prompt and is a pretty poem to boot! I like...my path evolves itself...

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  10. Thank you Linda for your comments. I truly appreciate each and every one of them.

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  11. Thanks, Victoria for your comments. I am very grateful for them.

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