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Sunday, July 19, 2020

Bliss and Despair

From Linda:

Write a poem about the feelings total bliss and total despair, together in one poem... It could be a comparison or a story or anything.

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  1. THE REAL SHIT

    In the balcony
    at the Apollo,
    big Black mama
    in the seat
    beside me,
    rapt as I was,
    at home as I
    was not,
    but no one minded
    a skinny white
    teenager there
    for the music I loved most.

    Frankie Lymon

    Why do fools
    fall
    in love, No, no
    no, no, no, I',
    not a juvenile
    delinquent,
    Goody
    goody for him,
    pause, and the crowd
    lifted him with
    raucous cheers, Goody
    goody for me, long
    dramatic pause
    and from next to me,
    on the balcony,

    "Do it, Frankie!"
    and he stopped,
    looked up at her,
    soft brown eyes,
    cheeks still smooth,
    "I'll
    do my best, baby."
    Not long after

    dead of an overdose,
    and for years after,
    pushers in Harlem would say,
    "This is the real shit, man,
    the stuff that killed the Lymon kid."

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  2. And revised:

    THE REAL SHIT

    In the balcony
    at the Apollo,
    big Black mama
    in the seat
    beside me,
    both there to hear
    Frankie Lymon

    Why do fools
    fall
    in love, then
    Goody
    goody for him,
    pause, and the crowd
    lifted him with
    raucous cheers, Goody
    goody for me, long
    dramatic pause
    and from that balcony,

    "Do it, Frankie!"
    and he stopped,
    looked up at her,
    soft brown eyes,
    cheeks still smooth,
    "I'll
    do my best, baby."
    Not long after

    dead of an overdose
    in his grandmother’s bathroom,
    and for years
    pushers in Harlem would sell it,
    "This is the real shit, man,
    the stuff that killed the Lymon kid."

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    1. Every word of it. Except the time lapse between me seeing Frankie at the Apollo and his death was a little longer, probably 6 or 7 years.

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    2. Powerful and the last stanza knocks you off your feet. Is "big black mama" from one of his songs? If not, it's kind of a stereotype.

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    3. How would you describe her in three words?

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    4. Actually I thought I had revised that line to just “big mama.” I meant to. Consider it changed.

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  3. Curtain of Rain

    Together we watch the rain
    dripping a thin curtain
    from roof's edge, hand in hand
    enjoying the silvery drops.

    How long do we have
    to watch the rain like this,
    to hold hands, to be us?
    My heart is squeezed with it.

    Wondering/not wondering
    I push away the despair
    that would overwhelm
    knowing it's not real

    but a shadow of someday.
    I let go of the not yet
    and embrace the bliss
    of now, of here, of us.

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    1. Beautiful imagery. And yes, gives the feeling of both bliss and despair.

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  4. we loved so deeply
    late in summer, with
    bliss and tenderness
    we parted for the fall
    no contact for us at all
    we chanced
    to meet again one day
    but, his memory of me was gone
    I longed for him
    I kissed him
    deep with passion
    it did not strike a vein
    i felt despair and horror
    because i thought
    I’d found my love
    but he was lost
    to life and things
    and did not remember
    me...

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  5. 》They Were Burned Up《
    See the skies set alight.
    View the comets, shine so bright.
    Streak across the empty space.
    Burn up, and gone without a trace.
    Never know that they were here,
    Unless quite closely we peer.
    The same goes,
    for us and those.
    People so great, and yet not known.
    Instead we hate, and children are shown
    In our schools,
    we were made as fools.
    If you were a muser,
    You were made as a looser.
    If you were smart,
    you were despised apart.
    If you held a good grade,
    To help them cheat you were made.
    And some souls shined so bright.
    But they where mocked and harassed
    And even though some tried to fight, and succeed.
    Many ended their own light, and from earth's sight, fleed.

    This poem is about the joy of being unique but it canamy times be turned against us to cause suffering.

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    1. ***poem is about the joy of being unique but how it can be turned against us to cause suffering

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